Brian the Lion-by Ben

                           Brian the Lion 
Learning Intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using correct spelling, capital letters and full stops correctly and in paragraph form. 
                             ALL ABOUT ME
Brian was a Lion. He has three older brothers, two older sisters and two younger brothers and he also has two lovely, kind and generous parents.   

One day Brian and his family went on a hunt when they saw ten hungry hyenas. They fought the hyenas, one of them scratched Brian while the other hyenas got chased away by Brian's older siblings and Brian's dad. His family took him back to the Savanna in Africa where they live and they took good care of him.

After four weeks Brian started to get better.

Later Brian and his family went for a walk in the savanna and they saw the hyenas again. Then the hyenas ran away. So Brian and his family all went back home and ate dinner all together.